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KEJO
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i didn't put much down so i'll putt all of what i have so far.
Ch. 1
“Killer…Killer…Killer…” the word was repeated over and over inside my head. I wanted it to stop. “Killer…Killer…Killer…” I had to get out of there. “Killer…Killer…Killer…” The steady rhythm of the word repeated over and over inside my head. The word it’s self seemed to be pounding with the force of a sledge-hammer against my skull. “Killer…Killer…Killer…”
The tears streamed down my face, blinding me. I stumbled into the wall and fell to the ground. I tried to get up but I couldn’t. After some minutes lying in the middle of the hallway, the pounding voice inside my head was joined by another voice. A voice that I had hoped never to hear inside my head ever again.
“You have done well. Soon you will be rid of all who oppose you. Then we will be feared, we will be respected. Just a few more now…”
“I don’t want this! Why are you doing this to me?!? LEAVE ME ALONE!!!” I screamed at the voice in my head, but I could tell that it’s presence was already gone.
The pounding voice of my own accusing mind was also silent. I welcomed the silence. It meant that for a short time my mind was my own. I decided to use this brief period of silence to go over the facts of the matter in my head. There had to be a reason. Something I had done in my life must have triggered this.
I remembered my fifth grade science lesson on physics. “For every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction.” Maybe if I could unlock the secrets of the voices then I could learn to defeat them. I stretched my conscience mind far back to the events that must have triggered this one horrible thing.
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| Sat May 17, 2008 12:14 pm |
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random112752
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i think that this FF could hav sum potential.
so...
plz plz plz update ASAP. 
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| Sat May 17, 2008 3:19 pm |
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KEJO
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“I love you…” those simple words were all he had said and yet it felt like he had said so much more. My heart swelled up until I thought it would burst from shear joy.
It was a cool August evening. Summer was coming to a close. My boyfriend Jeremy and I had walked up to the cliffs above the city and were now looking down at the fading light of the setting sun as it washed across the buildings. It was so romantic. The perfect place for him to make the confession. He hadn’t said a word all night. It must’ve been hard to say it. He had never been one to confess his feelings openly, but I always knew what he was feeling.
“I love you too…” I whispered to him. I felt totally at ease. I never wanted things to change. But of coarse that’s impossible isn’t it.
Just then his cell phone rang, ruining the moment. He blushed deep red then turned away to answer the call.
“Now’s not a good time. Can I call you later?………You know I want to see you too, but I’m in the middle of something right now………Yes I understand I’ll be right over…………Alright then………O.K …….Goodbye.
“Sorry about that. I have an aunt visiting from out of town and my mom wants me at home. Sorry I have to go. I’ll drop you off at home.” somehow I didn’t believe him. I couldn’t see how that was his mother on the phone.
Some days had passed since the incident on the cliff. And Jeremy had hardly said a word to me in almost three days. He was never in when I called, he didn’t even look at me in the halls at school. Why did he tell me that he loved me if he didn’t mean it. Or maybe he did and just changed his mind. I don’t know what to think.
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| Sat May 17, 2008 4:31 pm |
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Working at my after school job at the Burger King on 20th street, I saw Jeremy and a thin blond girl go into the café across the street. My first thoughts were that maybe she was a friend or a relative, but after my shift I went into the café like I always do for a coffee and saw them making out in a corner booth.
I ran out the door and all the way back home where I cried in my room until the hurt felt a little less. It was then that I noticed a dull ringing in my ears.
The next day at school I marched right up to Jeremy and demanded that he talk to me in private. He pulled me into an empty classroom and sat on a desk.
“What’s wrong” he asked. There was real concern in his eyes. For a moment I questioned what I had seen.
“Do you still love me Jeremy?” I asked dully. He moved forward so that he was looking me eye to eye.
“Of coarse I still love you Callie” he said softly. He leaned forward trying to kiss me. I pushed him away then stared at him coldly.
“Then I would apreciate it if you didn’t see other girls when last time I checked, we were still dating.”
Without another word I walked up to the door and left. With, I am happy to say, my dignity generally intact.
Ch. 2
As I walked to class, I was suddenly hit with the biggest headache I have ever had. It hit me so suddenly, so hard that I fell to the ground and screamed in pain. The door to almost every classroom opened up and curios students rushed into the hall. The last thing I remember was seeing a pair of sensible men’ s shoes running across the floor towards me. The pain was too intense and I blacked out.
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| Sat May 17, 2008 4:51 pm |
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seethefireinmyeyes
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OMG, its really good right now! update ASAP!  
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Why do people laugh if there is so many sad and bad things in the world? How can they? People are dying everywhere and they just don't care! What's freakin' wrong with them? |
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| Sat May 17, 2008 6:12 pm |
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When I woke up, I couldn’t see. Everything was blurry.
“I can’t se……” I tried to yell but before I could get it all out I leaned over and threw up.
Coughing and crying I tried to get my bearings. I was in a bed. It wasn’t my bed I knew that for sure. Even with my blurred vision I could see that everything was colored a sterile white. I had to be in a hospital.
My eyes cleared quite suddenly and I found that I was right. It was a small room. A machine on my right kept track of my heart beat which appeared to be normal. There was an iv in my arm and for the first time I wondered how long I’d been under.
Just then a nurse walked in. as soon as she saw me she ran out of the room again. I could hear her screaming “SHE’S AWAKE!!!! SHE’S AWAKE!!!” all the way down the hall. In a few minutes a doctor walked in.
“I’m pleased to see that you’ve decided to join us in the land of the living.” he said gravely. I looked at him with a puzzled expression.
“What do you mean???” I asked horrified.
“ While you were out you had two cardiac arrests and a blood clot in your neck. We had to operate and obviously the operation was successful.”
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this is KEJO
who else would it be???
check out my storys at http://www.thependragonadventure.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=69246
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| Sat May 17, 2008 6:29 pm |
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seethefireinmyeyes
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OMG! Don't stop now! I hate cliff hangers...keep writing! update ASAP! Update! 
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Why do people laugh if there is so many sad and bad things in the world? How can they? People are dying everywhere and they just don't care! What's freakin' wrong with them? |
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| Sat May 17, 2008 7:00 pm |
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KEJO
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| Sat May 17, 2008 7:05 pm |
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KEJO
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| Sat May 17, 2008 7:11 pm |
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random112752
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wow.
that was raelly good.
plz plz plz update ASAP.
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"Dont live your life acting like you have your whole life to live it, savor it and make good choices."
"Live life like your on a roller coaster. Dont regret that you got on, look at the twists and turns
ahead, and just have fun." |
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| Sat May 17, 2008 7:52 pm |
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seethefireinmyeyes
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It's AWESOME! update ASAP! now!
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Why do people laugh if there is so many sad and bad things in the world? How can they? People are dying everywhere and they just don't care! What's freakin' wrong with them? |
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| Sat May 17, 2008 8:33 pm |
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FallOfMan767
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| Sun May 18, 2008 8:00 am |
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KEJO
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| Sun May 18, 2008 9:10 am |
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seethefireinmyeyes
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Dang it. update ASAP anyways!
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Why do people laugh if there is so many sad and bad things in the world? How can they? People are dying everywhere and they just don't care! What's freakin' wrong with them? |
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| Sun May 18, 2008 10:00 am |
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Phoenix_24
Joined: 16 Apr 2008
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Location: Probably somewhere fun. If not I will be in the corner with a blindfold on. What? I can pretend! |
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I love this. its so chilling! That is a rare thing for book. Well done! 
Hay, im trying to check everones story, but can somebody check mine?
Its in the thread "the animal guards."
Again, good story. Update now, not asap, NOW!
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| Sun May 18, 2008 10:31 am |
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KEJO
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Home at last. It was great. As I took in the familiar house, I was suddenly hit with a wave of emotion. I was so lucky. As I looked at my mother, my father, my dog and cat, I realized what a good life I lived. Life is a fragile thing. I made a promise to myself not to take it for granted ever again.
My return to school was not celebrated by the majority of the student body. I was not popular, in fact I was just the opposite I was a pretty big loner. Jeremy didn’t hunt me down either. He now sat at the table of that pretty blond girl at lunch.
Everywhere I went I was greeted with stares and whispers. Whenever I walked into a room it was as if someone had reached down and suddenly taken the voices of everyone there.
What was even worse was I even got this treatment from the teachers. If I was late for class, I didn’t get in trouble, I was just meant with a silent room and an ashen faced teacher.
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this is KEJO
who else would it be???
check out my storys at http://www.thependragonadventure.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=69246
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| Sun May 18, 2008 10:40 am |
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Phoenix_24
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Awesomerandomness17
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KEJO: Really nice story! Update soon, and make them longer.
Phoenix: I'll comment on your story if you comment on mine (I updated yesterday Short though)
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On behalf of all Travelers, I suggest that we change the music in the flume from sweet musical notes, to Rock and Roll.
check out my awesome story at: http://www.thependragonadventure.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=2212861#2212861 |
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| Sun May 18, 2008 11:10 am |
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KEJO
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sorry i don't make them longer but i don't have a lot of time to write.
My illness had taken it’s toll on my parents too. They were constantly worried. Always watching me with these worried stares. It was a little unnerving. Sometimes, at night I would hear one of them get up. They would come into my room and sit on the end of my bed and just watch me sleep (well pretend to sleep). It was almost like they were waiting for me to get sick again.
In the next few weeks I would visit the hospital again a total of 3 times. I was still plagued with the horrible headaches and nausea, but it was never as bad as the first one. They thought I was going to have a stroke because my hands, feet , fingers or toes were numb. It got so bad I could barely pick up a pencil, or walk depending on what part of my body was numb.
Then suddenly it all stopped. The headaches, the nausea, the numbing of different body parts, all gone.
Then one night as I savoured my victory over my mysterious illness, I heard a voice.
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who else would it be???
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| Sun May 18, 2008 12:15 pm |
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KEJO
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It was scarcly more than a whisper. For a moment I thought it was my mom. But as I looked around I saw no one.
"Hello?" I called uncertainly. There was no reply accept for a faint snicker that came from the darkest corner of my bedroom.
At school the next day, Jeremy came up to me and took me aside.
"What's this about?" I asked suspiciosly.
"Well," he said looking embarassed. "We never officialy broke up".
"Okay then" I replied icily. "We're through" I yelled.
"He really shouldn't have done that" said the voice in my head. "Oh well. Now we need to make him suffer."
"Sit there!" commanded the voice in my head. I did as it commanded.
"Mind if I sit down?" I asked the group of kids sitting at the table.
"Pull up a chair and make yourself at home!" said a cute boy with deep green eyes and hair as black as pitch.
It turns out we all had a lot in common. Especially the black haired boy, Josh and I. It turns out he had been sick too exept with another illness. He had been sick with leukimea as I child. He knew all about the whispers and stares. Luckily, the doctors had cured him as a child.
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this is KEJO
who else would it be???
check out my storys at http://www.thependragonadventure.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=69246
http://www.thependragonadventure.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=69210 |
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| Sun May 18, 2008 9:46 pm |
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KEJO
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It was scarcly more than a whisper. For a moment I thought it was my mom. But as I looked around I saw no one.
"Hello?" I called uncertainly. There was no reply accept for a faint snicker that came from the darkest corner of my bedroom.
At school the next day, Jeremy came up to me and took me aside.
"What's this about?" I asked suspiciosly.
"Well," he said looking embarassed. "We never officialy broke up".
"Okay then" I replied icily. "We're through" I yelled.
"He really shouldn't have done that" said the voice in my head. "Oh well. Now we need to make him suffer."
"Sit there!" commanded the voice in my head. I did as it commanded.
"Mind if I sit down?" I asked the group of kids sitting at the table.
"Pull up a chair and make yourself at home!" said a cute boy with deep green eyes and hair as black as pitch.
It turns out we all had a lot in common. Especially the black haired boy, Josh and I. It turns out he had been sick too exept with another illness. He had been sick with leukimea as I child. He knew all about the whispers and stares. Luckily, the doctors had cured him as a child.
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this is KEJO
who else would it be???
check out my storys at http://www.thependragonadventure.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=69246
http://www.thependragonadventure.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=69210 |
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| Sun May 18, 2008 9:56 pm |
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seethefireinmyeyes
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Its really good now! update!
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| Mon May 19, 2008 2:12 pm |
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random112752
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this lyk spooky goooooood. 
plz plz plz update ASAP.
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"Dont live your life acting like you have your whole life to live it, savor it and make good choices."
"Live life like your on a roller coaster. Dont regret that you got on, look at the twists and turns
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| Mon May 19, 2008 2:43 pm |
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KEJO
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Over the next few weeks, Josh helped me rebuild my life. I really liked him and i think he liked me too, thanks to the voice in my head that told me what to do and say around him.
Through him I actually bacame quite popular. He had alot of friends that were just as cool as he was and of coarse those friends also had friends and so on and so on. Eventually I became quite well aquainted with almost the whole school. But i never even looked at Jeremy and his new girlfriend Abby. Well when i could help it that is.
sorry i just got back and i can't write alot full update tomorrow 
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this is KEJO
who else would it be???
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